THE TRIP
The alarm buzzed, it was 4.30 am, and ops I was late.
I rushed to the bathroom and was out by 4.40, usually I never take less than
half an hour but today I simply couldn’t afford. I searched for my phone, now whenever
you need something urgently you never usually find it; it has turned quite a
habit with me. My bedroom had completely turned into a mess, finally found my
phone under the blanket and without wasting any further time ranged up to
Surya………..
“Halo Surya, is it you?” blah the phone went
dead…………..
He called me back, he was still in bed. “How can we
both be late?” we had planned something today. I was literally pissed off, all
my excitement vanished, again my phone buzzed, it was Surya, I regained my
composure and picked up, “We still weren’t that late after all”, finally I
decided, I was not going to waste any further time, I jumped out of my bed,
took my charger and water bottle, now again “Where the hell was my bag?” I had
packed my bag yesterday and kept it near my bed, now things sort of seemed to
vanish, when u need it the most.
I madly searched here and there, asked Jojo my younger
brother about my bag, now this time, it was mummy who had kept the bag in the
shelf, I thanked her and dressed up, I preferred my leather jacket, as it was
chilling cold outside, and after all we were about to ride a 100 odd kilometers.
I left for Surya, reached at his place within a few minutes. Called him, now
from his window, I could notice him, his speck was after all so huge, one could
notice it’s frame even from miles away, tickling his speck in a funny way he
whispered “come in” I refused as we were already late, having no choice left he
came down in his sorts and sort of shoved me upstairs. I noticed aunty standing
in the stairway so I couldn’t resist, she asked whether I had my water bottle
or not, I nodded quietly, then finally Surya was all set.
We rushed down, and within minutes we were on NH-5, it
was quite pleasant outside, dew drops seemed to swathe the earth with a thick
blanket, sun was slowly waking up from its sleep, and rays of warmth soothed
our body and mind. It is always a treat to witness sunrise in winter, and that
too when you are on a motorbike. Surya was after all a good pillion; all the
time while I was riding he was busy taking clicks with his new Phone. Now we
two were not alone, we were to be joined later by Aman and Charan, Aman was my
childhood buddy, Charan happened to be my college mate. It was decided that they
would join us at Konark. Actually there is a little bit twist in this trip, it
was 14th of December and Aman’s birthday so we had decided to
surprise him with a trip just the day before so he was not prepared at all, but
we knew that he would never deny. But it was a huge task to convince his
parents, so he decided to keep it a secret from his parents, especially his
father, a very polite and humble gentleman but very strict when it comes to
Aman. Thus it was decided he along with Charan would join us later in the day
as an early morning winter ride with us might raise trouble for him, especially
on his birthday, after all he had to be present in the pooja and rituals that
usually follows on natalem.
By the time we had almost entered Puri district and
were heading towards Konark, people usually tend to visit Puri first and then
via the marine drive head towards Konark. But we had preferred the other way
round because of safety issues, it was not safe to return to Cuttack via Konark
at night, now from within I could sense that my stomach was growling. I knew
that it was time for us to take a break and have something. We looked for a
Tiffin stall, to our utter disappointment we could only find cows grazing on
both sides of the road, for the next 5 kilometers we could hardly find any
shop. Just then we came across a small market and after a tedious exertion we finally
ended up having bananas, In fact something is always better than nothing.
We again were back on the road, this time I was in the
pillion seat, the scenic hinterland untouched by human interventions seemed to
arouse in me a deep respect for Mother Nature, and the scenic landscapes were
indeed priceless, even a blind man could sense its beauty. As I was not driving
now, I was completely engrossed and lost in my world of imagination. A truck’s
constant honking finally brought me back to my senses. After a sort while we
were able to witness the majestic Sun temple standing tall above the ground. We
decided not to visit the temple first; instead we headed towards the marine
drive as Aman and Charan had not reached yet.
The beauty of Chandrabhaga was captivating, we were
not able to resist ourselves, and ran like kids towards the beach after parking
our bike. The view was breathtaking, we folded our jeans, as soon as tides
washed our feet’s an inexplicable sense of joy ran through our veins. We
enjoyed there for the time being and decided to explore more about the lives of
fishermen living in the coasts. Surya seemed a bit worried, I asked him about
the weird sort of expression that he was giving, and it was a mixture of
uncertainty and perplexity. He was actually of the opinion that Aman and Charan
should have reached by this time. I called Aman, but he was not answering, we
both tried calling them, charan’s phone was switched off, and Aman was not
answering the call. I tried calling Aman a couple of times…….. No response from
the other side. Now both of us grew tensed. Surya tried calling Charan again
but instead of him a lady in a polite way conferred, “The number you are trying
to call is either unreachable or switched off at the moment! Please try again
after sometime” blah the phone went dead....................
Friends follow my blogs to know more about "THE TRIP", part II, coming soon next week...... "सब्र का फल मीठा होता है "....................
ReplyDeleteWell written Pritam. All the best for your next trip.
ReplyDeletePerfectly Narrated... Waiting to read about ur next trip Pritam.. All the Best.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot
Deletebhai mast...😙eagerly waiting for the next one to out😀
ReplyDeleteThank you VAi, next one coming soon, next week
DeleteLucid in style and beautifully narrated....Waiting for ur part 2
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot
DeleteTu hi khela karibu😄...all the best for the 2nd part😊
ReplyDeleteThank u
DeleteNyc, what happened next?
ReplyDeleteBhai Bhai Bhai 😎😎😎
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteOutstanding! Wish u bright literary future!
ReplyDeleteThank you a lot sir
DeleteAn usual trip to Konark and Puri has been narrated in such a way which is no less than good stories written by professional writers.Selection of choicest words,harmony in ideas,proper coherence in thought-flow n' above all lucidity have made the entire piece of writing simply superb.It leaves a lasting impression in the mind of the readers and in my view,speaks volumes of talent and potentialities you hv with you .A beaming future awaits you.Keep it up.God bless you.
ReplyDeleteSir you have read my blog that in itself is a great achievement for me. Your remarks sir have imbibed me with new hope and spirit. My sincere regards sir. Thank you again. Hope you would like the second part even more.
DeleteThanks
ReplyDeleteThe flow of language is so uncomplicated that it could be understood by anyone even by the one who knows the basic of English. That's your expertise. And the best part is ending this in a continuing ambiguity and the eagerness remains for the next part. Waiting for the part 2 to be out soon. ��
ReplyDeleteThank you a lot, part 2 will be published soon this week............
DeleteRhythmic,lucid , beautiful.. It's very well and maturely written..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.......
DeleteBeautiful peace of art.
ReplyDeleteItsiits just wow!@
ReplyDelete